This week, we will be using different media to present our 100 Word Challenge. Instead of typing it out, we will be recording us reading it. We will use the program, Garage Band, and it will include sound effects.
Here are a couple from Paris and Thomas
Stay tuned for some more…
Hi, This comment is for the 100WC written by Paris.
Phew, got there just in time! This is a great post for the 100 word challenge where you described the frustration and slow progress of getting to school in heavy traffic. Your story moved forwards well with your use of time connectives and gave the reader a happy ending. I can remember the feelings of worry if I was ever late for school.
You frequently mentioned time in your story to explain how slowly you were going. Perhaps, to add a little variety, you could have used a simile to show how slowly the traffic moved.
I loved listening to your confident story telling. Thank you for sharing your challenge.